I am a student at in Uru MÄnuka. In 2020 I was a year 9 and in 2021 I will be a year 10. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Kia ora Rieya I really like your poster with clear instructions and eye-catching colours. I can see that you have received several comments today, well done! How can you keep people coming back to view your blog in the future? Whaea Raewyn
Well done Rieya! I like how you have included instructions on creating a blog. Maybe borders or colours could have been used to help the different aspects stand out? Keep up the good work and good luck with the challenge!
I enjoyed reading your blog post. You have given clear instructions and made it bright and colourful. Perhaps you could incorporate sight, sound and motion into some of your future DLOs. Good luck with the commenting challenge!
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or Ask a question you want to know more about
Hey Rieya, goodluck with the challenge.
ReplyDeleteNice blog post :)
ReplyDeleteNice blog post. Keep up the good work:)
ReplyDeleteKia ora Rieya
ReplyDeleteI really like your poster with clear instructions and eye-catching colours.
I can see that you have received several comments today, well done!
How can you keep people coming back to view your blog in the future?
Whaea Raewyn
Well done Rieya! I like how you have included instructions on creating a blog. Maybe borders or colours could have been used to help the different aspects stand out? Keep up the good work and good luck with the challenge!
ReplyDeletehi Rieya i like your blog and how yuo like cybersmart and great job keep it up
ReplyDeletefrom Alex
hey big sister aka rieya keep up the great work
ReplyDeletei love your work
ReplyDeleteKia ora Rieya,
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed reading your blog post. You have given clear instructions and made it bright and colourful. Perhaps you could incorporate sight, sound and motion into some of your future DLOs. Good luck with the commenting challenge!
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